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allfireburnsWriting in first person with certain characters makes me want to throw things. It doesn't help that I'm having trouble figuring out the plot of this story, but mostly it's the narrator. I'd say I'm going to kill her, but... I've already done that. God damn it.
I do like this story though, crazy plotting issues aside. (The plotting issues would be easier to deal with if a certain SOMEONE could manage linear thought. Or, you know, consistent verb tense.) It has Hunts. None of the Hunts anyone knows, but I like my crazy demon family. And then there's another random demon who I just know is going to cause me problems, but... shhh.
At some point I'm going to have to start plotting the zombie book, but... eh, that's what October's for. If I get it all solidly plotted out before then, I just know something shiny will attack me at the last minute and I'll end up trying to write that with absolutely no plot, and that doesn't end well for me.
My back hurts. My jaw hurts a little too, but that's more a persistent ache that's been going on for a couple weeks now for no apparent reason. I am feeling better than I was last night - that is a definite plus, physical pain aside, and I love my friends. You don't need to know why, just know that I do.
I do like this story though, crazy plotting issues aside. (The plotting issues would be easier to deal with if a certain SOMEONE could manage linear thought. Or, you know, consistent verb tense.) It has Hunts. None of the Hunts anyone knows, but I like my crazy demon family. And then there's another random demon who I just know is going to cause me problems, but... shhh.
At some point I'm going to have to start plotting the zombie book, but... eh, that's what October's for. If I get it all solidly plotted out before then, I just know something shiny will attack me at the last minute and I'll end up trying to write that with absolutely no plot, and that doesn't end well for me.
My back hurts. My jaw hurts a little too, but that's more a persistent ache that's been going on for a couple weeks now for no apparent reason. I am feeling better than I was last night - that is a definite plus, physical pain aside, and I love my friends. You don't need to know why, just know that I do.
